My Pack and London
A Rich girl who moves to london with her pack which include her her brother and his friends. They move in with the london pack. there is love fighting action, ALL IN LONDON

Posts and Comments
Important Post
andrewscorah

This has promise and the writing flows, there are some spelling mistakes and typos, also remember to capitalize names, it is Ally not ally. Close punctuation in speech. You are writing a lot in past tense, it needs to be present tense example-you write,I stepped out just in time to see my brother staring at me with anger in his eyes-stepping out of the changing room I see my brother Peter, he is staring over at me and I could... Show more

To ensure optimal functioning, our website uses cookies. By using the website you agree to the use of cookies. More info
OK
Top of page
No Thumbnail Remove Please choose a reason Please enter the place in the book. en en_US