Great book. It needs more to finish the story.
This is such a good book, you should continue with it. I love where the story line is going and would love to see the relationship between Aria and Grayson progress and get stronger. I would also like to see Aria become more confident within herself and watch as she gets over this 'pot-hole' in her life and get over her father and forgive him too. As well as that, seeing Grayson became more humble and caring would be lovely... Show more
You can do whatever you want to do with this book, but make sure it makes you feel confident in it. What I just put would be what I would put into this. I hope that you do update and write more.
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I have only started writing at the end of summer and this was the first story i have ever writen. its not finished and has some spelling and grammer problems but i hope that you enjoy reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it. Your comments would be nice to help me finish and make my story better. Thank you.