Absolutely loving your work to bits. You might be interested on publishing your other works at N0velStar, and gather more audience.
This a wonderful read. Amazing vocab I LOVE it! You go GIRL!
That Is amazing and so realistic I love your frame of mind!
Nicely written... To the point and very descriptive. Thanks for sharing!
You're poetry is lovely. I can feel the sadness, too. Much like when I was young and longed for love. I found it, at last, inside myself!
I really adore the poem, "Mom's Story". (Did I get the title right?)