What would you do if you had another life to live. Would it make a difference if you had the chance to do something all over again. Is your fate sealed or does free will actually give you a fighting chance. It’s possible that you will never know since life’s rewind button is ever so elusive. Then again, it’s possible that you wouldn’t know you had been given a second chance until after you’ve made your choices–or your choices were made for you.
David loved to read, perhaps to a fault. He loved the stories and the characters and daydreaming about how he would have done things differently to make everything better. This is the story about his (day) dream come true, for better or worse. When he haplessly makes a wish at just the right moment, haplessly and heedlessly falling into another place with no way back, he finds himself faced with the need to survive long enough to get out from under the umbrella of his careless words, should that window of opportunity still be open.
I like this story. Needs editing here and there but I enjoyed the mystery. However, I almost got lost when you wrote the flashback and how it joined in the present of the story.
All in all, I like it. More please...
Thanks. I'll have more available soon.