time traveling with Amber

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User: torilol
time traveling with Amber
anber's city was destoyed by some stuck up guys who really needs a huge fighting range there but amber an madalyn mostly amber are there to save the day

  • Adventure
  • 152 Words
  • Ages 6 and up
  • 502
  • 1
  • Publication Date: 07-15-2014
Keywords: 
adventure, time travel
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James Gerard
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James Gerard

Tori, your story telling is very good. And while you are very young you should pay more attention to punctuation and spelling. Besides that, I like your imagination--I can read that there are a lot of good stories yet to come.

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