i love this book nice storyline and i like the characters, you should write more, one thing i have to say you missed a few words out making it hard to understand. but other than that I LOVE THIS BOOK WRITE MORE PLEASE^_^
This is just AWSOME!! please write more soon!!! x :)
love it please finish it and email when u do please and thanx
verb tenses need some work, but this is great! i'm not one for romance and i still want to find out what happens to Pama!
I am intrigued to read more.
Please post in the Teen Writers & Writing group, when you update this story.
Chris
this story was amazing you need to finish it let me know when you add more i can't wait to read the rest :)