As Embers Dim
"You are melody to my harmony and from the music our bodies create
Love is made and spent in a lazy afternoon..." I wrote this for the "Roses are Red" contest. This is the first time I've posted anything here, so cross your fingers for me!

Keywords: 
Poetry, Romance, Love, Heartbreak
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tinkdelapink

Renee, I really appreciate that complement. I truly believe that great literature in any form, however, especially in poetry, is in itself another form of music. I myself, cannot live without music playing at ALL times :D Mozart & Tchaikovsky to The Beatles & The Who to The Raveonnettes & The Dodos.

In any case, thank you for the encouragement....It actually inspired another poem! :D

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UniquePoet60

Linda,

Very beautiful. You have written a very profound and lyrical poem. You are a very talented poet.

Exceptional Writing!

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tinkdelapink

I'm so glad that you were able to take away from that piece exactely what I had intended. I appreciate your compliment!

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tinkdelapink

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and were able to glean all that emotion and take it with you.

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gooduklady

An impressive piece of work. You meld and compare desire with music, making your words lyrical expressions of lust and wanting..and, ultimately, loss.

You are definitely gifted. I shall look forward with anticipation to more of your work.

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mysterywriter723

Your beautiful poem was very intellectual. It held glimpses into desire and passion; the want of a lover. I sensed restraint, fulfillment, and a bit of unrequited love between the two lovers. Excellent writing! You're quite talented.

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tinkdelapink

I JUST WANTED TO LET EVERYONE KNOW THAT I'M GOING TO TRY TO ANSWER ALL MY COMMENTS. HOWEVER, IF I DON'T GET TO YOU - IT'S BECAUSE I DON'T LIKE YOU.......NO NO NO NO NO NO........I HAVE A REALLY DRY SARCASTIC WIT AND I COULDN'T HELP MYSELF - IT'S JUST THAT I'VE FALLEN BEHIND IN COMMENTS AND I'LL BE GETTING TO YOURS SOON.

I REALLY WANT TO THANK ALL MY FRIENDS HERE FOR THEIR SUPPORT AND GUIDANCE AND PUSHES :P THIS IS THE FIRST... Show more

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tinkdelapink

I am an EXTREMELY musical person myself. To have someone musical read this piece and pick up on those undertones is a joy. AND! You liked it :)

I really appreciate the writer's and the musical feedback.

Thanks so much.

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tinkdelapink

Didn't you know....All beauty has a little sadness in it.

...I'm pretty sure we knew eachother two past lives ago....my name was Mia, you told me you were Donovan. We met in France. You found that quaint bistro we stayed in for that little night of poetry and wine that didn't end for weeks....

Sorry, I can't help but indulge myself :p

Thanks so much for the beautiful comment!

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tinkdelapink

It can be seen in so many obvious forms. I'm SO! glad that YOU of all people were all people were able to truely enjoy this piece.

Thanks Doll :p

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