Wow, I love the myth! The personalities were very well described(: And the whole book was very thrilling well written!
Sorry if this is a REALLY short review(:
It was just an awesome book! I usually read teen fiction and romance, but this was great! And like cwzvil92 said, shortening the blurb can be helpful(: And by the way, thank you for the comment! I was grinning from ear to ear when I read it. :D
I liked your mythological story. The descriptions of the three days of creation created great images as well as hints of personality traits of each God. What I would have liked to see was a shorter blurb. I think your blurb gives too much away and would bring in more readers if it was shorter. Also in the second chapter the two times you mentioned nor sounded a bit off to me, maybe think about another word. However, that is... Show more
You're a good drabble writer. I loved that you chose the Norse gods as characters for each drabble. You sir have my vote.
Of Norse Gods, I always have an interest. There are tellings and re-tellings of them in numerous tales; but you seem to capture their personalities with exceptional pose!
I have happily voted.