Summer Shotgun!

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Summer Shotgun!
Three Drabbles.
One teen working at a gas station, at the wrong place at the wrong time. One young tween arguing with her younger brother. One teen who should have stayed loyal to her boyfriend.

  • Fiction
  • 304 Words
  • Ages 14 and up
  • 359
  • 1
  • Publication Date: 07-10-2012
Posts and Comments
felixthecat
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felixthecat

I particularly liked (in the first drabble), "...in that there cash register." THAT is authentic dialogue! For your age (or any age), you write extremely well. A vote from me without reservations.

prandall
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prandall

I enjoyed this Drabble entry! Some interesting descriptions, good use of dialogue and originality. Well done.

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