That thing inside of me...

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That thing inside of me...
The book is about a girl dealing with a disease she had been born with.
Please tell me your opinion on this story!

  • Drama
  • 2204 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 518
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 08-26-2011
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psprakash
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psprakash

Yes, I am. The story was great. Though the ending was predictable, the way you presented it was spectacular. The use of words, tense and emotions is highly impressive. Barring a few 'healthy' typos, the content was clean and tidy.

Great Job!
-Prakash

P.S. You might want enter it into the Newbie Contest. That would be great.

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