BookRix

sweet poem!

First loves are always childish, bitter sweet and very unadulterated which is what makes them so unique and special. I love how you portrayed that through your poem. It was a great read.

Thank you for your comment revkenr. I appreciate feedback on my writings. I was hoping someone would feel that one special time through these words as I did when I wrote them...

First love is always special, and this poem really hit the mark.