Bec
This is the Consolidation of past and present feelings. The release of showing the feelings of guilt and trying to come to terms with dealing with the current loss of a sister, and the final knowing of what cannot be changed.

  • Poetry
  • 222 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 437
  • 2
  • Publication Date: 01-28-2010
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marieta
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marieta

''you will always remain
in our hearts''
this poem is so touchful that it makes me cry...you got my vote..

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rebekahjennings
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rebekahjennings

Hey Tanya,

So great to see you have put something up. This is a wonderful poem, I had goose bumps and felt your sorrow with you.

I hope that you can forgive yourself because we are all only but human, I'm sure your sister has forgiven you.

I am really, really looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Bek

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