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I note your writing skill is easy to read and I was able to follow the story with no problem. The main character was solidly built for the short lenght of the story.

This would be an excellant Prologue/Opening Chapter for a longer book built on the premise it establishes.

Thank you for participating in our
fiction writing contest "My Best Fiction".

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