wow...wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Fabulous!!
Wow. This was cool. Seriously. I did have a few revision and editing ideas, which i would be more than happy to share with you sometime, but overall, I'm excited.
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Well this was a very nihilistic tale! Frederich Neitzche would have admired this as a brilliant example of his own philosophy in creative form.
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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)
Thanks :-) ;-) :D :-D xD
I think I finally got it! (how to post my stories with page breaks) The only thing I still can't do is center the chapters and such. Any hints on how I can correct that problem? Anyway, hope you enjoy this story.
Any ideas and suggestions are gladly welcomed.
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