I just started reading your book and I think it's really cool. I like the thought of ink black rain falling onto her window to leave a message about magic! Great idea! I'm wondering when you're going to publish this - and if you're going to publish with BookRix?
Also, are you going to publish a whole series? Will there be any added illustrations?
I had a hard time getting into the story. I enjoyed your characters however the initial personality you had described them with in the book and the way they spoke sometimes didn't match. Besides a few missplaced commas, your book definitely has interesting ideas and a story that doesn't lag in excitement. Good Job. :)
Very captivating and entertaining book.
congratulations!
Heartafire (Holly)
That was a fun story to read. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors but other than that it was good. Keep up the good work
That way I don't spoil the story before it's published hopefully this summer. You'll be able to read the rest by then.
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