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It's not bad as a beginning. There are some good poems. Pay attention to the punctuation and spelling mistakes. Wish you the best of luck.

this is really cool.i've never seen anything better than this.you are plain awesome. good job.you should write more of these.

Some nice poetry especially the title poem, "Shivering Strokes". Some grammatical and spelling errors.

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poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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