The Life She Never Lived

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The Life She Never Lived
a rich girl finds that her gymnastics career could go down the toilet and then she finds out she is moving from California to west Wales what and how is she going to take it

  • Fantasy
  • 90 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 742
  • 9
  • Publication Date: 05-28-2011
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robbedbygreed
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robbedbygreed

This story sounds interesting, however, a lot of your punctuation is off. And unfortunately, this makes it hard to read your work. If you read your work aloud you will be able to find most mistakes and fix them immediately.

I can't wait to see how this story turns out. Good luck :)

Great job!
Keep writing!

---RbG

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peggles
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peggles

A refreshing different story
you can't stop there
I want to find out what will happen
give me more soon

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