Transformation

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Transformation
I am bound in a prison of flesh and bone. My arms and legs are bent, frozen, and I am splayed on the bed like a doll tossed in a corner. My backbone presses into the firm mattress, and I feel the burning and oozing from a bedsore. All I want to do is roll over; all I can do is lie still.

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staceydoss

thank you for the comment. I don't expect everyone to cry. Like you said, everyone has their genre preferences, and won't be deeply touched (usually) by anything outside of those genres. I appreciate your reading my story and leaving a comment, even though it was outside your preferred genres!

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Deleted User

It was good. Sorry to say that I didn't cry though. But being a fantasy/ fiction /science fiction person probably explains it.

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staceydoss

This story was based on a child I had the privilege to know, and although I never worked directly with her, her life has touched mine in such a way that even 8 years later, I'm still excited about the technological and physical breakthrough she experienced.

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DaddyDagur

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww it is so nice and i thought it was really good will you check out my book witch is comeing soo Running for life or......even death it is coming along nicly

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jeneve

Wow. Oh my goodness! Let me start by saynig that I am a CNA in a long term total-care facility. This story has really spoken to me. This was obviously written with great care and consideration. Bravo.

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l.vamp

It has such a good meaning to it!!! It is so sad and happy at the same time! :P

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Deleted User

Thanks Stacey for such a poignantly moving story, told with a loving touch

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gloria35

GREAT STORY!!!
I lived in a nursing home for 14yrs so I CAN relate to Beth's story.

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