Secrets in the woods

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Secrets in the woods
The Shadow Walkers are returning, and with the Chosen and the Hunters still at war in the woods, The Shadows are going to take over. Alaya Faith aged 16 doesn't realise yet, but she's the only person who can stop it. On the other hand there is Ashwood Jones, son of the Hunters leader. He wants to find and trap Alaya for himself, enchanted by her unusual purple eyes...

  • Fantasy
  • 6683 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 624
  • 10
  • Publication Date: 07-08-2011
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Pretty good :) Very imaginitive and captivating! A few small spelling errors but mostly I was thinking the story could be expanded. If you put more dialogue and descriptive text in to set the scenary, you could easily make what you have a third longer again and more vivid in the process. A very original idea though, I'm impressed :)

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