BookRix

Keep writing. You will know what to write, how to write and how to present your writing also. All the best. Good attempt. Keep going...

I received a note from you asking to read your story. I am assuming you are a very young girl. Because of that, all I will say is....keep practicing your writing. Try not to use such big fonts, check your spelling before you upload your work, and make sure your story is complete.

Keep working at your writing and I am sure one day you will have a wonderful story to tell.

its not the best but there will be better ones