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my daughter suggesteed this book, is she rude on this website?
But i enjoyed the book, the writting needs fixed up a bit but it seems like a good idead

I LOVE IT! HOW CAN NO ONE LOVE IT!

wtf thats 1 MESSED up brother

Thank you ya I am only able to edit on my grandmothers computer which isn't often so I'm working on it :3

I enjoyed this book. You could work on the grammar...(a lot) but it is an interesting story and quite enjoyable. I can't wait to read the next one.

Just curious, is it based on wolf's rain, the animation? Nice story, you need to arrange the grammar, but it's not bad.

Please everyone who has read both books PLEASE DON'T put spoilers it ruins it for others

You have some grammar and spelling issues. Those can be fixed.

The ability to spin a plot into an interesting story is something you have a handle on. Its a talent.

You will find as you improve the mechanics of your writing, it will become easier for people to read, and they will enjoy it more.

Really awesome story telling, I really like it!