my life

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fawnstar
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my life
I had a plan life.I just had to take cae of the elder's in my village.Well that changed.The elder's got mad at us for haveing green eye's and blach hair.They said that we will kill the other's who don't have those color eye's or hair.

  • Fantasy
  • 797 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 429
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 06-28-2011
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skysky.bluestar
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skysky.bluestar

nice book

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Forever.Works.
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Forever.Works.

it was good so far but kinda went fast you should try to slow down a bit with your writing and discribe things more. besides that your a really good writer for your age. :)

only trying to help,
~Cheyenne

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