BookRix

I really like it awesome for teens like me to read :-)

this book is GREAT so far tell me when you update :)

You probably need another teenager to R & R this. Basically, what you have here is a daily journal chronicling the daily trials and tribulations of a young teenage girl.

It is not your classic story with a beginning, middle and end, so therefor I'm somewhat at a loss to review it. It will not appeal to a general audience.
As a diary/journal of a young girl, fine. As a classic "story," no.

A few things on mechanics. Dialogue: Whenever the speaker changes, ALWAYS start a new paragraph. And shorten your paragraphs, find a natural break and start a new one. Shorter ones are better than longer. In general, write out your numbers (one instead of 1), capitalize the letter I, as in I'm instead of i'm.

Your writing is generally clear and literate for your age. I have a suggestion. You have several interesting entries/occurrences in your "journal," why not pick one and elaborate on it in detail and make a short story based on it?

You obviously enjoy writing, keep at it.

tell me when you update :)

i really liked this, it was very interesting and it kept my attention

Its really nice write some more!! =3

OMG tell me when you update :)

I really liked this book, it made me remember how crazy it was to be a teen girl.

I like the book. U made some errors in the book, but so far u did great. keep writing.

i like so far its touching