THE HOT INNOCENT

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THE HOT INNOCENT
A young woman seeks out lover to take her virginity, and she wants her brothers best friend! only him.

  • Erotic
  • 889 Words
  • Ages 18 and up
  • 2118
  • 102
  • Publication Date: 07-21-2011
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Deleted User

Yeah, update Your typos make up for the shortness of the preview.

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Deleted User

You write with conviction so clean it up, its worth it. You have the knack of providing a good tale but it is spoiled by your usage and abuse of the language. With some editing you'll have winner after winner. I'm sure you can do it.

nboogerm
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nboogerm

what an asshole...but good,really loved it
u should write more

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