Ajax is a normal boy who doesn't like to see injustice and bullying. He tries his best to protect people and that leads to him being expelled from his school. After starting a new school he meets a girl who just happens to be a werewolf. (Haven't fully decided on what happening yet- I have a rough story line planned but that could completely change, so I'm not writing any more to the description- this is obviously ongoing, but I would love if people read what's written even just to comment and help me with the style its written in or to critique or complement. Hopefully this will end up great!)
Well written so far. The story is flowing nicely with no drag and just enough foreshadowing to keep you curious. only suggestion is grammatical. when writing conversations each time the speaker changes start a new paragraph. Even if it would just be a one word paragraph.
Thanks! I'm just trying to get it out for now, but I'll try to work on it as I'm writing more :)
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