MIDNIGHT

FIRE & ICE By:
babyluv
User: babyluv
MIDNIGHT
A shy girl as been under the radar and no one wants a shy girl to tame as a mate but maybe the best of all choices does?

  • Fantasy
  • 1378 Words
  • Ages 18 and up
  • 254
  • 28
  • Publication Date: 07-21-2011
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spicedcitrus
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spicedcitrus

It seems like it will be a good story. However, the start up is a bit rough and the plot/characters are not well explained... Keep up the good work!

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Deleted User

i liked it but got lost a couple time. Please let me know when you add more

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Deleted User

kinda hard to comprehend..revise edit perhaps? OTHERWISE IT ROCKED!

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Deleted User

you should totally write more! i love it haha!

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