This has a great plot and message to it. I love how you make something that is so negative sound so great, positive and beautiful! Its sad how this is actually things that really happen. But its great that someone like you puts them into perspective of that person. And to top it all off, it was surrounded by God, and His messages.
You did an excellent job building this story up to the climax...it was an engaging story that a reader has to complete...I enjoyed the descritions and the plot.
God Bless,
Tyrone
This is a typical day of a mass murderer. He woke and the rain spoke to him to say this is the day of truth! Crazy crazy guy! Good writing!
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