BookRix

Sereni, "The Bus Ride" , a poem about a very scary situation. I really enjoyed reading. Great work!

Glad you read and enjoyed it. Thank you Serena

That was really good. Its rhyme wasn't obvious as an amateur's(aka mine)and it had a plot of sorts. It was interesting how luck played and how true I think that to be.

You are so right in our cars we are insulated from the daily happenings. Thanks for reading it. Serena

You enjoyed every moment in the bus.Anxiety kept you thinking what will happened next.Consider those who daily travel by bus to their destinations.How much life they enjoy ?Once in a blue moon ,we must travel in public transport ,to experience the things in reality.good work.

Than you for reading and I am glad you enjoyed it.thanks Serena

I think I was frightened a little thinking the way the world is today and all of the unbalanced people running around. Thanks Serena

The way you tell stories with your verses is absolutely charming.
I wasn't frightened for you...I somehow knew you'd write an escape:)
Excellent little piece!

Glad you read it and enjoyed it. Serena

Thank you I am delighted to be writing and enjoying all of your comments. Thanks again Serena