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Very Good Poem, I enjoyed it.

I enjoyed this poem very much, especially when it came to the end, when the children asked, "where is the rest?" I thought that was cute and funny. :)

It is quite a cheerful poem, in time for Christmas cheers. :)

Sereni,

You have written a very nice, lively, true to life poem. I really like it. Excellent writing!

Loved that.
Wendyxxx

the commercialism trap and in a beautiful bow you certainly did wrap.

Years ago when I first decried the making of Christmas into a credit card mess, one preacher was saying, 'As long as Jesus is still in there, then this madness is worth it."

But I too am afraid that with the political correctness, the celebration of Jesus is not even a tag line.

Thanks for reading and saving my poem. I am afraid one day the true meaning of Christmas will be pushed aside and it will just be another day to shop.

A lovely, light hearted poem.
Thank you,
Chris

Thanks not everything is bad about the holidays.The family times are wonderful. Thanks Serena

Ah so true, yet so sad. Right on Serena, beautifully and poignantly done! What a poet you are, like a shining star! Robynn

I did say this year that it may be a little lean and out of the mouth of a 12yr. old came a reply that didn't matter he loved me.Serena