Not the sort of thing i would normally read. I know you are an emotional and, dare i say, feminine writer. But, i am so happy i did.
I was drawn in straight away as your beginning was excellent, and i thought it was very well crafted all the way.
Good luck in the competition and take a vote.
Kade x
Enjoyed the read Serena. As always with your stories it tugs at some emotion - terror in the beginning but turns to joy, and a bit of mixed blessing as well. Good straightforward writing. You have a vote from me.
this deserves a vote - healing minds and memories is a tricky business but a heart of thanksgiving and seeing why someone was involved as a savior rather than a enemy is a beautiful trait...p
I am so sorry but the print is too small and too pale for me to read. But thanks for addin g Nathan Fillion to youi cast list, yeah! Evelyn
I truly enjoyed the dialogue, it definitely caught my attention and did not release it until the very end. Great job Serena! You have my vote.
Very well done, Serena. You have my under-the-wire vote!!