The Chosen One

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secret.z
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The Chosen One
Linzy was just a normal girl before she know who is she really are. She adopted parents has been kill by Demons and she has been take to ZARIOUS the magical world that will change her life forever and she will know the true story about her past and her real parents that has been kill by her uncle Dendrict.Then she need to saved ZARIOUS and all the creatures that life in it from her uncle.Will Linzy able to saved it or will she run from the truth.

  • Fantasy
  • 8677 Words
  • Ages 12 and up
  • 1170
  • 13
  • Publication Date: 05-19-2012
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secret.z
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secret.z

I just delete some chapter because I want to retype it and change the story line a bit. And I hope all of your support.

Love secret.z.

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secret.z
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secret.z

Thank for the advice,I'll try my best to correct all my mistakes that I have made. And thank for the love it mean a lot to me.

red.rose.mikaela
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red.rose.mikaela

You have an interesting story there, but it contains a lot of mystakes.
You have words written wrong, some have plural forms instead of singular and in reverse.
And I advice you to pay attention to verbs. You used past tence instead of present and such.
Now I don't want to upset you, I am telling you these in order to correct yourself and improve.
Use google translate or any other sited to help you.
Good luck in the future.

dreams51298
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dreams51298

Why do you write like that it's kinda confusing. But other than that it's a really good book.

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