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Read it and really liked it.
Good beginning. I slipped into the story easily and the dialogue worked well.
Sorry.. Page 8 Has a (MUST FIX)that has escaped your edits - middle of the page. Is a vampire.. is a ware.. which is she?
It didn't hurt the read - I still enjoyed the book. My only gripe is that it ended. Finish please. Great story. Good writing.
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sarahbear5311
Hey, IworshipLions
Thanks very much,
Oh wow thanks for bringing that to my attention.. deffinately fix that one up right away
Yes, im in progres of writing more. :) i'll keep u updated :D
Hey guys, sorry not finished yet, still a major work in progress. but tell me what you think thus far.. :)