This is different...unique...imaginative and definitely deserves a vote.
One. This is so imaginative; how you used the die as a focal point of Lena's decision-making. Excellent!
Two. Your grammar is flawless, and oh how that makes a good story breathe life.
My congratulations, and of course my vote.
She has problems, that need professional attention right away.
Yet, how could I not love this story of a woman on the edge.
Great job, came back to vote.
Glynis
And probably not that unrealistic either. Well written.
I think it would help to give us a little more information about Lena and the peculiar way she lived her life, by rolling the dice. What caused her to do this? Even though she made the rules, and knew what each number meant she made an excuse not to follow through. Why?
It was an interesting subject and the only thing I found was a misspelled word at the bottom of the page I think you meant: He was probably cuddly. Good writing.