Secrets on the Bayou

A Short Southern Story (Not Complete) By:
Secrets on the Bayou
Ellie Marie is just a normal southern girl, minus the fact that shes a body guard and contract killer who lives with her crazy Aunt Betty who practices witchcraft and lives on the Louisiana Bayou. Ellie is still trying to find her place on the swamp through every late night clean up in New Orleans and through her rocky emotional state of unsteady relationships, male or female. So she does what she knows best as she paves the road...

  • Fiction
  • 6199 Words
  • Ages 14 and up
  • 774
  • 20
  • Publication Date: 02-28-2011
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RevkenR
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RevkenR

Very well written.

I am looking forward to finding out why Curley would want to kill his girls.

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kimmyj79
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kimmyj79

This was a little hard to read..But it did read well once you could get into it..thank you for sharing this, polish it up a little bit and let me know:)

yezall
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yezall

It was hard for me to read because the paragraphs are so incredibly long. There was dialogue hidden in there as well.

I love the concept and idea for this book. I would like to see you continue. The grammar wasn't bad nor the spelling. I would like to see you go over this again and thin it out into more paragraphs. Showcase your dialogue. I want to know more about what these people are saying.

leatherette
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leatherette

The story is building up quite nicely and the sexual tension is building slowly, I hope there are more chapters coming!

athenasdaughter
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athenasdaughter

I am enjoying this story and am looking forward to reading more of it. Please let me know when you write more.

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