I was reading, thinking of how we take the precious moments for granted when it struck me who was telling the story . . . I'd write more but there are too many tears clouding my vision, and I don't have words to tell you how your story touched me.
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Ah Stevie,
How perfectly you write in 1st pov. The little things add such dimension, but it is the pathos, I think..how each of your narrators elicit such deep emotional response from the reader. Exceptional (again).
This was beautiful and moving I thought. Only gradually does it dawn on you who is looking down at the child. I'll read more of your writing.
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stevie.grace
thanks!
Loved this one! Sweet, but also sad! Keep on writing