Christmas Wish

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Christmas Wish
Do you ever wonder if they watch over us?


Excerpt from Freedom From Chains, available at the Kindle store.


This Book is Part of a Series "Freedom From Chains"
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mkidd6

I was reading, thinking of how we take the precious moments for granted when it struck me who was telling the story . . . I'd write more but there are too many tears clouding my vision, and I don't have words to tell you how your story touched me.

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Rgabel

Heart wrenching, heart warming and heart felt. With the written word you create crisp, clean images. You capture the longing and sorrow of a loved one saying goodbye. Good job. Robynn

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Deleted User

Nothing I've ever read has made me shed a tear, until now. For that, stevie, you have my vote.

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Deleted User

Such a sweet and tender short. :) All of the little details made made this story that much more heart wrenching. I loved it definitely adding to favourites :)

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felixthecat

Ah Stevie,
How perfectly you write in 1st pov. The little things add such dimension, but it is the pathos, I think..how each of your narrators elicit such deep emotional response from the reader. Exceptional (again).

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mirandabm

This was beautiful and moving I thought. Only gradually does it dawn on you who is looking down at the child. I'll read more of your writing.

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stevie.grace

thanks!

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