I enjoyed your novel! Good work so far. A few very minor errors in punctuation/grammar but I'm sure you will fix that when you go back and review and edit:) I enjoyed learning about House of Night, gets me interested about reading/watching it. I like twists to classic cliches; thats what I try to do with my own AHITN story but this is like over the top unique and awesome! Keep up the good work! Voted!
Review - Definitely a fast paced opening. You move the story quite well. Interesting characters right from the start. You put the back story in well. I would like to read the finished story. Excellent cover. Wonderful job. Voted. Robynn
PS - page 15-16 was between page 21-23
Dropped by for a quick vote....this was a good piece :)
Good luck in the contest! Let's both do our best!
It was really good. :) I do hope you continue on with it!
( ︀^_^ ︀) ➜ ＷＷＷ.ＩＮＴＩＭＣＯＮＴＡＣＴ.ＣＯＭ?sapheria_1344711914.2736771107