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This poem..it evokes emotions. Sad ones. We all mourn for the victims of the Japan earthquake, and this poem reminded me of it two years after it actually happened, and made me remember what I felt like watching the news that day. Beautiful job. Just one thing. If you're going to write a series of 'haikus' on a subject that has everything to do with the country haikus originally came from, you bet people are going to count syllables. It wasn't always 5-7-5, but I forgive you that. Poetry is liberty, after all, and you can do as you please.

Jacco

HI,
this poetry is making pictures in your head. Yes, menkind allways thing, they can controll everything, but if a katasthroph reveals, we have to learn that we are are so mightyness.
here the devastating thing was that the atomic power plant joined the first katasthrophy.
Actually two katasthrophies broke down on Japan.
and I saw a doku, that poeple there weren´t informed and even changed their living place to another with was even more radioactivly polluted.
there is a lot of greedyness. i wrote a book about that. Have to translate it.
Good that you mentioned this theme in a poetry.
LG
dahlia437

This was a great poem. I could feel the dense emotions and sorrow very clearly. And I loved the title, my new story portrays some small aspects of Japanese culture as well.

now, i'm not real what you call a poet and i dont read much poetry, but your words are full with sorrow. of saddness, at least thats how it came across to me. i litturally felt a lump forming in my throat, and tears nag at the back of my eyes. soals floating in the arms of the wind, how did you come up with somthing like that, somthing so simple yet intense...i loved it. and i dont love poetry.........it was really good :')

Your poem stirred my soul with its haunting beauty. There was a deep sadness expressed in each line. It is heartwarming to know that you remembered the lives that were lost, with this moving tribute. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Stunningly written and beautiful emotion.