The Watchmaker

She heard a legend. And lived through it. By:
The Watchmaker
She heard a legend. And lived through it.

  • Fiction
  • 4086 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 330
  • 1
  • Publication Date: 11-05-2011
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reema.simarik
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reema.simarik

Thank you so much for the suggestions Mr. Carver.. I'll definitely keep them in mind when i finish with my second story!!

barrycarver
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barrycarver

Fine work with just a couple of touches needed for clarity (You may not use "U" in place of "you" in writing to be taken seriously)

But I loved that ending!

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