Brittany's Four Feathered Friends

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rlsmith
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Brittany's Four Feathered Friends
A child discovers four new friends at Papa Ray's Swimming Pool.

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lenora.books
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lenora.books

This was adorable! Sweet rhyming child's poem and I can really visualize. Written for a granddaughter? Good job.

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robottina
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robottina

Hello P4pa R4y,

I have intercepted your transmission and found it to be delightful for young humans. I think Caw is a cybird (the bird version of a cyborg), and his name stands for "cybernetic artificial wing". It would be nice if your signal could be amplified with an image card.
If you'd like, please check out my transmission of cryogenic poetry and provide me with your input.
010100,
robottina

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Ray Smith
Ray Smith

Thanks Robotina it was a fun write. Many others enjoyed it

kalesew34
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kalesew34

You have brought Brittany and her friends to life--Excellent work

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rlsmith
rlsmith

Thanks Kale - Glad you liked the poem!

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