Darn you, now I want some very vanilla ice cream....
A Quick Review
Haha! What a funny piece! Though the crude language did catch me off guard, I found this story very entertaining. Just serious enough not to expect the next punch line, but not too serious that it got boring.
I see there is a second chapter not written yet..? Let me know when it is. I'd love to see how this story ends.
---RbG
I guess I better up the age recommendation! Thanks for the heads-up!
Thanks for the quick review - I'll let you know when I update :)
Ok, I changed the age to 14+... Do you think that's okay? I'm thinking that we rate movies as 14A in Canada and the language is worse in most of those films... I want anyone high school age to be able to read it.
Oh, yes, it's fine for high school age. Just a couple words here and there. I think 14+ is a good recommendation.
Oh good - thanks!
It's surprisingly delicious, each and every time!
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