Isn't the eyes on the cover the eyes of toothless off how to train your dragon ? (:
I don't know why, but I was very surprised when Sam went down in a hail of gunfire. What was I expecting? But when I read of Sam's encounter with Virgil, I knew I was onto something very good:)
I would like to have seen Sam GET that bowl of beer:)
Great, light story, and your knowledge of the city and the police force showed through, Gunny. Only one small thing I noticed that correction thereof would improve the story I... Show more
I just read half of this in one go, and it was a really interesting and entertaining read. I really enjoyed your take on the story - and your take on heaven rejecting Sam and sending him back as a ..... It's very original, which is great too see! My only advice is that when you have time you need to go back and read through it. There are a couple of minor spelling errors, and I find that you tend to use commas in places that... Show more
Review - First, awesome cover! And it is well written. You definitely have done your research. Enjoyed the 'cat' concept. It was a different take on coming back down here for unfinished business. Keep my interest throughout. Loved that you left it open for a 'sequel.' Let me know if you add another chapter in the Chronicles of Sam and John. Wonderful job. Robynn
No! It came off of graphics program for cat's eyes.