Lucifer's Propeller

A very short story By:
prandall
User: prandall
Lucifer's Propeller
A very short, slightly humorous misadventure involving a remote-controlled ceiling fan, a dining room table with a footstool on top, a screwdriver, and someone who struggles with self-esteem when it comes to DIY projects. And aside from temporary emotional scarring, no-one was injured during the ensuing chaos.

  • Humor
  • 664 Words
  • Ages 12 and up
  • 341
  • 2
  • Publication Date: 12-14-2014
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Deleted User

LOL... this is awesome. Sounds like something that would happen to me... if I had the nerve to try to fix something like that on my own...

felixthecat
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felixthecat

Ain't that the truth, lol. Designers: Two psychologists noted for their CIA work. I cracked up all the way through, Preston. Suffered right along with you, too:) Me? I would have just disconnected the fan wire...if I could have found it! But what do they say? "All's well that ends well."

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prandall
prandall

Thanks Patrick! One has to laugh to get through the tears...

felixthecat
felixthecat

You were crying? :) I missed that part!

prandall
prandall

One doesn't like to admit certain things...

felixthecat
felixthecat

Well, anyway, to the writing itself. The clipped sentences; the single words used for impact...it all lent itself perfectly to the story. Pace was more than excellent, but as in all GOOD writing...it's plot, lol, and yours definitely had that! It bled with frustration:)

L. Avery Brown
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L. Avery Brown

OMG - THIS IS HILARIOUS!

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prandall
prandall

Thanks L. Avery! Painful as it was, I'm glad to provide a laugh or two. Makes it almost worth while...

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