Hi Paula, I knew you penned lovely children's stories, but you are multi-talented. I would love to read a compilation of your ghost stories.
I believe you could elongate this to make the telling a bot clearer... but it also begs for more of the story to be told.
There's lots of, pardon the expression, fertile ground here and the treatment you've already given it makes me want for more.
On a cold and stormy night! Ouija boards do talk- good built up and the figure on the window or curtain. No wonder little Perry is sick with that cold spot hovering..... Would this not be a good halloween story?
I already have a another ghost story called A Night in the Woods - written a little more low key then this one....thanks for the star..p
Great story! I really enjoyed it. Will there be more?