White Stars, Black Sky

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White Stars, Black Sky
A Nursery Rhyme to the Northern Lad

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mysterywriter723

I found this poem to be charming and sweet. I chuckled at certain lines like "peddling down the lane" and "the Northern Boy's in love". It's amusing to picture Laz this way. I thought the wording was cute and adorable overall. How nice to dedicate the poem to our good ole buddy, ole pal, Laz!

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mysterywriter723

Oh, yes. I really love the line "Green cheese moon above". My favorite. Smooth and well written poem.

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paulashene

beautifully done...words darling, graphics woow - that's a double wow!

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felixthecat

Darn it, Laz! Your comment is way better than my poem, lol! Golden Boy. Northern Boy:)

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lazarus67

Thank you Patrick, what can I say?
So nice you think of me that way.
How you built a poem round my name.
Now take S'RENA, and do the same.

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felixthecat

Thanks, Sereni! I'm sitting at my computer, writing:) Or trying, anyway:)

I must also thank The Northern Boy, my buddy here, for designing a great cover!

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sereni

Loved your sweet poem and how you wrote Laz into it. If Laz is with the girl where are you? Serena

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