well after reading this epic story, i think i will crawl back under my rock now!
This is gorgeous, very well written!
Thanks, P:) Maybe the only thing I wish I'd done was either delete Freddie Mercury's song (I love Queen:), or else tie it into the ending, written by Grayson Hugh. Consistency.
"Picasso...I've heard of him..." my god, Pat you really did a great job with this one. The biblical references along to notes on art and the sensual details and imagery were blended really well. This was beautiful.
I don't think you were here when I wrote/published this one, Ang. Glad you liked it!!!
I might have just been shy and not commenting much back then...and I'm glad I saw this :D
Absolutely beautiful, Patrick. And so, so, sad. One of the better pieces of writing I've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. Shame on me for overlooking it for this long. Again, beautifully done.
COMING FROM YOU, JOHN...:) X 1,000!
This was beautiful. How often do we prevent ourselves from seeing? Simply because we've convinced ourselves that it's impossible?
What I wrote two years ago about this? Ditto. On steroids. ')
Great story. Confidently written. Loved it.
Like Michael, many of us, at times, lack the courage to take a step into the unknown? Maybe reading this story will inspire you to: JUST DO IT!
Well done, Patrick. Looking forward to reading many more of your books.
BTW, lovely cover too.
Thanks my man! Seriously though, NO writer here or anywhere else needs to feel cowed by mine or anyone else's work. Especially by mine, lol. I must believe your comment was tongue-in-cheek!
no it was sincere, amazing read, i think i will go back to the drawing board, i am light years behind everyone else :) if it was star wars i would be in the first movie, and everyone else in star wars 7 :)
Ha ha ha. But the first was the BEST:)
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of course star wars one was the best :)