BookRix

I just finished reading this next part. I lived in San Francisco for a year back in the '80s, and you brought back memories of its character. But what I really wish to do is...STRANGLE you for not writing more! Holy cow, Pat! The beauty of this work keeps increasing! Every new chapter is, appropriately enough, like a new movement in a magnificent piano concerto! I'm a pianist, and can relate to so many aspects of this part of the story (I adored your descriptions of her fingers), on many, many levels. So now I have to grit my teeth and make myself practice patience the way I practice scales. Grrr. What an incredible writer you are!

I'm ticked off! I totally missed "This is a work-in-Progress" thingie before I started reading. So, there I am in the middle of this beautiful, romantic tale, anticipating a wonderful resolution--and now I have to wait! It's like watching a great TV series, only to have them nail you with the "to be continued" ending.

As always, beautifully written, Patrick. And, as always, I'm hooked. Now, how long do we have to wait for the rest of this romantic tale to play itself out?

Just started reading (okay, and then I read the whole thing) - and I'm wondering why you didn't use the chapter function - it's so much easier to navigate, especially if you're going to make this long. Did you decide not to use it because there is something missing between chapters 1 and "two"? You can always move the chapters around, to be in whatever order you want, later on :) I'm a stickler for eBook formatting, what can I say?

Also, if you're referring to the real palace, it's spelled Gyeongbokgung - I had Easter brunch on the front lawn of that palace a few years ago :) I have pictures inside and out if you want me to send them for more details? I also have insider knowledge of Seoul and Korean culture if you have questions (I'm still in touch with several Korean friends as well).

That being said - Wow. I thought the beginning was beautiful, like a mystical fairy tale, but also with the hint of science fiction that is always a welcome addition to your stories. Unrequited love is always a good start to any story, and I'm excited to see how the modern day section connects with the past.

Let me know when you add more!

Wow... this was really intriguing. I loved the "voice" for the first character. Can't wait to read more... I'm certainly wondering where this is headed... :)

I stop for a quick take out and stuttered to a stop when I saw your link. I argued with myself that time was pressing, but I thought if I don't link now, I'll miss another story and end up buying it instead. Finding you put up a portion, I thought, yes, in and out but noooo ... Here you go writing of a Korean soul in and out of the cosmos and then stop at the keyboard .... Back to your keyboard Fella, and play out the tune .... we’re all awaiting those heavenly notes...

I am hooked! And I totally agree with Judy. This is one of the BEST things you've written, Patrick. It's one of those things that you think . . . wow, I wish I could write something like this--I wish I had half the talent. Your gift for words breaks through in this one and the story itself leaps from the pages. Get to work, sir! You definitely need to bet busy and write more.

I read this as I was drinking a cup of Sakura Allure flavored green tea. It was a moment of mulit-leveled perfection. This is probably one of the best things of yours that I've read, and I sincerely hope you continue it. Your prose...perfect. Your concept...masterful. I'm blown away - your talent just keeps growing, Pat. Thank you for sharing this work of art with us "commoners." You've made a lovely Mother's Day into a delightful one!

Magnificent!

This was beautiful...I wasn't able to stop turning the page, especially when the love between the princess and the beggar unfurled. I love the idea of a lost and travelling soul and the imagery you give is breath taking. I especially loved the line about the heaven and the trillion galaxies.
Please add more soon.

Glynis and Chris, Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I value your input and am smiling, having read your comments:)

Your stories are like wine, they just keep getting better & better the more you write. Kudos Pat.