Adam and Eve

In the Garden By:
Adam and Eve
There they stand in the garden, pondering over the half-completed latest creations lying a few feet away in the soft grass. There are questions that arise concerning the two creatures.

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augustus

You published this in 2012? I don't remember reading it. In any event, good job. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

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judycolella

"...Think, stupid. Think!..." Finally stopped laughing, but now my face hurts - the mental image...! You get the Master of Hysterically Funny Inspirations Award for that one! "D

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njoyabl

Very cute

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felixthecat

Well, not strictly biblical, facts-wise...but...:)

njoyabl

I often wonder if God is a woman himself/ herself! It has been the topic of several debates. I have several supporting ideas and facts that lead me to believe it could be then again, no one knows that's living.

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mysterywriter723

This story is very amusing and entertaining. I like the parts where Ghost digs his claws in too deep and where he scares the sparrows. Lol! The whole idea of presenting the Holy Trinity, in the process of creating humans, is genius. You demonstrate an abundance of knowledge in chemistry. Very cute little tale.

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Deleted User

Very funny. Totally worth the read.

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angamonkey

You sir never cease to amaze me. This was witty and clever and intelligently funny. I would look around and enter it into contests because I think it has a good chance at winning.

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Deleted User

That was the funniest story I have ever read about Adam and Eve. You drew all the characters well.

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Glynis Rankin

have a way with this form of writing. I loved it! What an imagination and the concept of them pondering the stomach of all things. That rascally snake!

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J.C. Laird

Lighthearted and imaginative. It had me smiling the whole way through, with the Creator trying to figure out how to make things work in his creations.

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