This one's perfect. Every sentence, every word used with a master's sureness. The suspense is phenomenal. The images are shocking and brutal in the way you presented them to the reader. They work perfectly.
I too loved how you structured it in reverse time. If the technique has been done before, I don't think it could have been done any better. Congratulations, Patrick. This IS Literary at its finest.
1
Comment
This comment was deleted.
Creepy! looking forward to finishing this one, Patrick!