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and touching!

Alienation from the world around them is captured well in this tale.

it's great hope u like mines

Embellishment is not needed when the right phrases are woven in a strong word tapestry.

great story voted and really enjoyed it

You got a vote from me. Very well written. And the words made me see and feel everything that was going on. Very good and made me wanting more : )

I love the line "Keep your eyes closed and your fears open" Good writing./joeparente vote and star

oh wow this is GOOD! :D

Your view of things is pretty much how I feel. I love your style. Look forward to reading more!

Back in the '60s and early '70s we used to write warning pieces like this, and then everyone fell asleep again. Great wake-up call! Simple and effective, well-written. Got my vote - hope you write lots more!