Please tell me you will eventually be FINISHING this.... It has potential...
Really. three pages? That's like an introduction...almost. Granted, it sounded intriguing, it wets the appetite, but then falls flat because that's all it does. Hope you finish writing it, it sounds like it has the potential to be on the the favorite list.
You are doing a great job but is it really over?
ok um 6 pages does not a book make so I Id like to read a booke from begging to end how do I do that on hear...lol
Let me know when you add more.you need a couple pages but so far good